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碎语而不是诗

“One day I shall have happy memories-memories of feet held in the mud, faces to make you feel afraid, rules to make a fool of you, hell to make you cry aloud. I shall have known the emptiness of hope and mocking miseries. I shall have known what free submission was, the favour of starvation all the grace and privilege of dying fast as well.”

法英对照很有勇气，但往往一对发现翻得不大准（passe compose和l'imparfait毫无区分也是够了...）二战及之后的诗都好，但前期似乎些微乏力（感觉跟选诗有关系）很多时候都有Brecht的影子，但是surrealism的况味相当完美地让有力处更有力，温柔处更温柔。用语和意象简白（此处和Magritte的追求很相似）日常处又像MP。no punctuation带来奔流之势（也是自己法语还不够好无法一眼看出语法停顿）Tout a la couleur de l’aurore. 如果读了整本的爱/自由/希望但没觉得腻烦，这也就是诗艺的证明了吧。

艾吕雅英译本质量还是比中译本好不少的！「...On absence without desire, on barren solitude, on the steps of death,I write your name;On health returned, on vanished risk, on hope without remembrance,I write your name;And by the power of a word,I begin my life again,I was born to know you, to name you:Liberty.」

碎语而不是诗