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碎语而不是诗

“One day I shall have happy memories-memories of feet held in the mud, faces to make you feel afraid, rules to make a fool of you, hell to make you cry aloud. I shall have known the emptiness of hope and mocking miseries. I shall have known what free submission was, the favour of starvation all the grace and privilege of dying fast as well.”

艾吕雅英译本质量还是比中译本好不少的！「...On absence without desire, on barren solitude, on the steps of death,I write your name;On health returned, on vanished risk, on hope without remembrance,I write your name;And by the power of a word,I begin my life again,I was born to know you, to name you:Liberty.」

法英对照很有勇气，但往往一对发现翻得不大准（passe compose和l'imparfait毫无区分也是够了...）二战及之后的诗都好，但前期似乎些微乏力（感觉跟选诗有关系）很多时候都有Brecht的影子，但是surrealism的况味相当完美地让有力处更有力，温柔处更温柔。用语和意象简白（此处和Magritte的追求很相似）日常处又像MP。no punctuation带来奔流之势（也是自己法语还不够好无法一眼看出语法停顿）Tout a la couleur de l’aurore. 如果读了整本的爱/自由/希望但没觉得腻烦，这也就是诗艺的证明了吧。

碎语而不是诗