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艾呂雅英譯本質量還是比中譯本好不少的！「...On absence without desire, on barren solitude, on the steps of death,I write your name;On health returned, on vanished risk, on hope without remembrance,I write your name;And by the power of a word,I begin my life again,I was born to know you, to name you:Liberty.」

“One day I shall have happy memories-memories of feet held in the mud, faces to make you feel afraid, rules to make a fool of you, hell to make you cry aloud. I shall have known the emptiness of hope and mocking miseries. I shall have known what free submission was, the favour of starvation all the grace and privilege of dying fast as well.”

“One day I shall have happy memories-memories of feet held in the mud, faces to make you feel afraid, rules to make a fool of you, hell to make you cry aloud. I shall have known the emptiness of hope and mocking miseries. I shall have known what free submission was, the favour of starvation all the grace and privilege of dying fast as well.”

法英對照很有勇氣，但往往一對發現翻得不大準（passe compose和l'imparfait毫無區分也是夠瞭...）二戰及之後的詩都好，但前期似乎些微乏力（感覺跟選詩有關係）很多時候都有Brecht的影子，但是surrealism的況味相當完美地讓有力處更有力，溫柔處更溫柔。用語和意象簡白（此處和Magritte的追求很相似）日常處又像MP。no punctuation帶來奔流之勢（也是自己法語還不夠好無法一眼看齣語法停頓）Tout a la couleur de l’aurore. 如果讀瞭整本的愛/自由/希望但沒覺得膩煩，這也就是詩藝的證明瞭吧。

碎語而不是詩